Friday 23 May 2014

100 WC

Please read Cameron's 100WC below. Top one in 8GMc this week!

“Just to throw it out there, Lucy, as well as millions of people need to go to school, not just want to, need to. The only way we can stop mass amounts of poverty and begging on the streets is if we send these children to school, no “ifs" no “buts”. We have to stop all those children suffering and set things right. We can decrease poverty dramatically by giving all disabled kids the education they need for a free healthy life. Wouldn't you want the same if you in poverty and disabled? Lucy absolutely deserves to go to school."

1 comment:

  1. Congratulations Cam I liked how you used your persuasive language in that piece of writing. Once again congratulations. By Ben Donovan

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