Wednesday 17 September 2014

Showcased!


Well done to Cameron who had his writing showcased on the 100wc site! Out of 584 entries from around the world he had one of the best pieces of writing. See his writing below:


‘How long is the cross country?’ asked the boy.
‘It’ll be five kilometres longer unless you shut your trap!’ threatened the teacher, holding up his midget gun ready to plummet a bullet into the sky and start the race.
Beneath the boy’s scrawny body and goosebump infected skin were flutters of monarchs, wriggling throughout his empty stomach.
‘Do you think I can make it?’ questioned the boy.
‘Don’t stoke my patience. Now finally we can make a start.’

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