Wednesday 11 June 2014

Writing Prompt

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  3. “Wow that was one big job” Bob commented in a tired voice. Bob, Dave and Simon had a horrific morning sorting out a chocolate egg that had blocked half the Motorway heading, towards Auckland. It was finally time for their lunch break which they really did deserve.They all decided to climb upon a high pole to have their tasty chicken sandwich. They could now see how the lazy traffic was going. It seemed to be going fine in Daves view. “I cant wait to start work again” Simon said in a sarcastic voice. Yes definitely said the others laughing.


    By Nicola ,Mckenzie, Sophie

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  4. It was a nice calm day on the South Auckland Motorway. We were just casually driving along the motorway, about to come into the Auckland signs. I looked up one of the poles that was on the side of the motorway, to see six little wee men sitting eating their lunch.
    “OMG”! “MUM MUM look up there” I shouted. “What is it Lara”. Its six little men sitting on a lamp pole eating their lunch. “Why do you think they might be up there”? I mumbled to mum.
    “I don’t no”. “Should we stop and ask”?
    By Lara

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  5. “That must be so boring just sitting up on old destroyed overpass eating a sandwich trying to get people to go to their restaurant” says Sammy the car driver. Crash!!! Bang!!! Sammy’s car has crashed into the overpass. And the traffic starts. Cars after cars after cars. “ Someone call 111 please. Sammy is trapped in your car almost dead. The ambulance is here and trying to get Sammy out of the car. Next the police arrive and the people who are doing the adverts get in trouble because the law says NO ADVERTS ON HIGHWAYS. Sammy was fine in the end.

    BY MADI!!!!!

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  6. The wind blew in the men's faces. They were all hoping that they wouldn't get blown off the crane, that wouldn't end well.
    ‘Ugh I'm tired man we have had a massive day at work’
    ‘Yea but this break won't last forever you know’
    Suddenly the well known roar of the General Lee, 69 Charger burst’s to life. We hear police sirens a few blocks away. The exhausts of the stolen cars erupt into a blue flame.
    ‘Wow they must be in a hurry if they are equipping their cars with Nos’
    The Police’s Holden Commodores screeches around the corner...

    By Harrison and Mitchell

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  7. You could say I was going on strike, but I call it protesting. The lack of entertainment was unbearable. I had to get something to do. I stared at the bare metal structure that loomed over me.Then a light bulb appeared. It’s a no-brainer, I started to climb. Munching sounds found their way into my ears. I kept climbing and spotted five people sitting, casually having lunch He questioned them ‘’Who are you guys.’’
    ‘’We are the rebel-”
    CREAK! THe metal frame was about to topple over. People were screaming.
    “Help!” Bob screamed.
    the structure lurched and snapped.

    By Ben and Cam

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  8. You could say I was going on strike, but I call it protesting. The lack of entertainment was unbearable. I had to get something to do. I stared at the bare metal structure that loomed over me.Then a light bulb appeared. It’s a no-brainer, I started to climb. Munching sounds found their way into my ears. I kept climbing and spotted five people sitting, casually having lunch He questioned them ‘’Who are you guys.’’
    ‘’We are the rebel-”
    CREAK! THe metal frame was about to topple over. People were screaming.
    “Help!” Bob screamed.
    the structure lurched and snapped.

    By Ben and Cam

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  9. “Wow that was one big job” Bob commented in a tired voice. Bob, Dave and Simon had a horrific morning sorting out a chocolate egg that had blocked half the Motorway heading, towards Auckland. It was finally time for their lunch break which they really did deserve.They all decided to climb upon a high pole to have their tasty chicken sandwich. They could now see how the lazy traffic was going. It seemed to be going fine in Daves view. “I cant wait to start work again” Simon said in a sarcastic voice. Yes definitely said the others laughing.


    By Nicola ,Mckenzie, Sophie

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  10. As the workers all reached for their delicious lunch something caught their eye.They looked closely it moved again.One of the workers reached his hand into the brown lunch bag.Suddenly he let out a horrifying scream.Everyone started to shake in terror like a cat in the arctic.It was a living sandwich it was the most disgusting thing I had ever seen.It had a slimy, green substance all over it, had teeth as sharp as knives and as big as dinosaurs, everyone was so scared until one of the men said “Mr. fluffykins” is that you.
    From Taine and Nihal

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  12. One day there were 6 men on a pole.They were eating their tastes lunch. I am having a bad day said bob why said fred because it’s friday the 13th it is curst said ted then suddenly jack fell and landed in the water under them.They said are alright and he did not reply they rush down and call out jack can you hear me and he did no reply again. When they got closer they see him lying in the water knocked out they rush down to him and got him out of the water he didn’t wake up

    By Olivia B

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  13. One ordinary day after a devastating nuclear reaction some builders were having lunch on their break during building a high skyscraper.Then this massive silver robotic robot just shoots burning nuclear laser beams at the new tower.The workers quickly get inside and the building starts to lean like the leaning tower of pisa.A big crashing sound comes from the bottom of the building.All the bottom floors crumbled down like a cookie.One of the innocent sturdy workers throws rock solid hammer at the robots eye.The robot has a psycho spaz and sparks fizz out of him.

    By shaan

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  14. It was a cold morning in a quiet town, the traffic was always bad but today it was extremely horrible, because today there was a giant smashed open egg. oozing out the side of the egg was it’s horrible gross yoke . All the yoke was spread over the road. I was just wondering whats next, “EVERYONE get out of the city immediately there are meatball meteorites everyone get out immedia” BOOM! CRASH! POW! “oh my god”. As i start running back i turn around i see everyone screaming and running for there life and then suddenly…

    By Jackson

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  15. It was a cold morning in a quiet town, the traffic was always bad but today it was extremely horrible, because today there was a giant smashed open egg. oozing out the side of the egg was it’s horrible gross yoke . All the yoke was spread over the road. I was just wondering whats next, “EVERYONE get out of the city immediately there are meatball meteorites everyone get out immedia” BOOM! CRASH! POW! “oh my god”. As i start running back i turn around i see everyone screaming and running for there life and then suddenly…

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